After my recent post β€˜Anatomy of Happiness’,Β here’s a poem I wrote that describes sadness, because life is a roller coaster…

 

The feeling you get

That you’re all alone,

In a desert of misery

No one to call

Where reducing to tears

Feels like the only way,

Just bearing this feeling

Day by day

You turn to people

But they’re not there,

You try to run

But you don’t know where

No glimpse of a soul

To set you free,

For miles and miles

Only darkness to see

Hours fly by,

It just gets colder

Your continual tears

Long for a shoulder

The spirits of the air

It all feels like lies,

You wish it were a dream

When you opened your eyes….

 

-Saania

160 responses to “Anatomy of Sadness”

  1. Chef V. Avatar
    Chef V.

    Love it Saania πŸ˜‰πŸ‘Š

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    1. SaaniaSparkle πŸ§šπŸ»β€β™€οΈ Avatar
      SaaniaSparkle πŸ§šπŸ»β€β™€οΈ

      Thank-you so much! βœοΈπŸ’›

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  2. SHRUTI DUBEY Avatar
    SHRUTI DUBEY

    It’s a beautiful, a bit sad and extremely relatable poetry.

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    1. SaaniaSparkle πŸ§šπŸ»β€β™€οΈ Avatar
      SaaniaSparkle πŸ§šπŸ»β€β™€οΈ

      Thank-you so much ✨

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  3. charlypriest Avatar
    charlypriest

    This is the first poem I read from you, I thought it was great. Very touching, well written, certainly expressed the feeling and the reader (at least me) could feel the emotions. Very good read.

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    1. SaaniaSparkle πŸ§šπŸ»β€β™€οΈ Avatar
      SaaniaSparkle πŸ§šπŸ»β€β™€οΈ

      I’m happy to hear that, since it was the second poem I’ve ever written…

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      1. charlypriest Avatar
        charlypriest

        Only? You got to write more, I thought it was great. Me and quite a lot of others.

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      2. SaaniaSparkle πŸ§šπŸ»β€β™€οΈ Avatar
        SaaniaSparkle πŸ§šπŸ»β€β™€οΈ

        Okay, I’ll try to write more. I enjoy poetry so why not 😊

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      3. charlypriest Avatar
        charlypriest

        Not good answer, you will write more not try write more. ItΒ΄s actually an order from me a Priest. Start now, don’t procrastinate or IΒ΄ll do a dominate?

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      4. SaaniaSparkle πŸ§šπŸ»β€β™€οΈ Avatar
        SaaniaSparkle πŸ§šπŸ»β€β™€οΈ

        Okay, got you!
        I’m starting right away ….

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  4. argyris446 Avatar
    argyris446

    Reblogged this on worldtraveller70.

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  5. shadawss shadawss Avatar
    shadawss shadawss

    You are a good philosopher

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    1. SaaniaSparkle πŸ§šπŸ»β€β™€οΈ Avatar
      SaaniaSparkle πŸ§šπŸ»β€β™€οΈ

      Thanks.

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      1. shadawss shadawss Avatar
        shadawss shadawss

        🀝

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  6. #Eaglewrites Avatar
    #Eaglewrites

    Brilliant work!

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  7. Fredrick G. Kanja Avatar
    Fredrick G. Kanja

    But it can also be a moment of self’ reflection

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  8. A.M Avatar
    A.M

    Amazing! Love it! You truly make a reader feel the emotions.

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    1. SaaniaSparkle πŸ§šπŸ»β€β™€οΈ Avatar
      SaaniaSparkle πŸ§šπŸ»β€β™€οΈ

      I’m glad, that’s the biggest validation for a poet! πŸ’•

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      1. A.M Avatar
        A.M

        =)

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  9. dglittergirl Avatar
    dglittergirl

    I can’t describe how amazing that poem was in words but I can say you are very talented and shouldn’t ever stop writing. God has given you an amazing gift don’t lose it. Thanks for writing and sharing this.

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